Back in September, when I did my post about firm-breasted lawyers, in the comments section I vented my hope that by writing better stories we can build a better audience.
And yet… a few days back I crashed into a sword & sorcery plot synopsis featuring
busty and cruel queen Whatshername
And I thought – is the fact that she’s busty so damn important to the plot that we need to know about her busty-ness even before we buy the story?
Because that’s what we get about her – a name, her cruel personality, and her boobs.
And so ok, Whatshername’s cruel – it makes sense you tell me early, because this way I know who the bad guy is going to be.
A bit of a spoiler, but it figures.
Am I supposed to buy the book because of that?
Because that’s what the synopsis is for – hooking me and getting me to buy the book. Continue reading