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Talented and Successful

I’m posting two Stephen King quotes here.
King is not my favorite author, but I respect his professional skills and I enjoyed a few of his books.
Basically, when someone sells the number of books King sold, any critical analysis, any evaluation of skill, talent, technique or whatever becomes an exercise in futility.

The reason I’m putting these two quotes here is because I’ve was involved (marginally) in two discussions in the past few days, about two words that are often used when talking about writing, and that cause me a certain amount of unease, so to speak.
These words being talented and successful. Continue reading


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Done it!

The story is called Slam Dance (ant that will be its title if the publisher does not decide to change it) and yes, it’s the kill the stripper story I mentioned in the past.
15.000 words of it, and change.
And it’s now going through one last check and then it will be on its way to the editor – and with 12 hours until the deadline.
Whew!

And I am pretty pleased myself – not only for the fact that I made it well within the deadline, but most of all because this was for me a first: my first proper police procedural, without any noir or hard-boiled elements, no fantasy or supernatural or science-fictional elements.
Just straight cops and robbers.
And pulling it was a lot of hard work.

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As usual, the internet was a huge resource – I learned a lot about the most popular car and the best beer and the cheapest whiskey in a certain state of the Bible Belt. I explored local cooking and fishing practices.
I studied hunting lodges and brothels.stripper-shoes-double-as-tip-jar
And yes, strip joints, too.
All of this, of course, I did for my Art.
And through Google – which makes all the naughty bits not-so-naughty after all, and the food and beverages 100% calories and alcohol free.

But now it’s done, and I’ll take the night off.
The stripper’s dead, long live the stripper.


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Kill the stripper

In four days I have to deliver a 15.000 words of hard-hitting police procedural, and I am currently at 5000 words. The story, that is perfectly outlined and with all the characters and the set-pieces in place, just won’t write itself.
But something happened this afternoon.

When I am completely stuck – just as I was stuck this afternoon – I go for a walk.
One of the perks of living in the countryside is you can take long walks in the middle of nothing – no noise, no people, no distractions.
Only the hills and, these days, the autumn colors.
It can be quite beautiful – autiumn is probably the best season hereabouts.

And I was walking when I hit upon a solution.
It took less than ten minutes: I’ll have to kill the stripper.
Now, this is a sad business, because I love flawed female characters, and racy, sexy, strong-willed women that happen to be walking on the wildside usually trigger my affection.
But there is no doubt – I just have to look at the outline, and I can see that, as soon as you kill the stripper, every piece moves into the right position and connects neatly with the others, and the end result is a solid story.

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So I did it.
I came home from my walk and I wrote the scene in which the stripper is killed.
700 words.
Bingo.
The story now makes complete sense – which is very important for a mystery story.

In the next three days, it will be just a matter of mechanically typing the rest of the story.
I’ll meet the deadline, and I am sure my publisher will be pleased with the overall results.
If only had there been another way…


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Shaken, not stirred

A big drawback of writing lots of different stuff on a very tight schedule is, sometimes your subconscious (or whatever it is) gives you a field day.
Or night.
This is the reason why, last night, I spent a few hours tossing and turning in my bed, my mind overloaded with scenes from two stories I am writing (story n°1) and revising (story n° 2).

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My imagination gave me a roller coaster ride between a small town in the Bible Belt and a South-American plateau infested with dinosaurs.
You can imagine the effects.

I emerged bleary-eyed and impossibly grumpy at 7 a.m., to the sound of someone shooting a shotgun – has the hunting season began already, or is just someone warming up? I don’t know. Continue reading


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… and blog posts too!

It does not get any more hectic than this…

  • Tomorrow I will deliver a new translation.
  • Next week an Italian publisher will tell me and my writing partner how many novels they want in the series, and how much they are paying.
  • By the 30th of the month I have to deliver a 15.000-words story to my American publisher.
  • By the 7th of October I will deliver a 10.000-words SF story as a bonus to the backers of my crowdfunding.
  • By the 15th of October I have to (finally) deliver a 50.000-words novel to my publisher Down Under.
  • On the 16th of October, two or possibly three anthologies will be presented featuring a story of mine each.
  • By the 31st of October I will have to deliver another 15.000-words story to my American publisher.
  • By the 15th of November I plan to submit a new 6000-words Aculeo & Amunet story to an online magazine.
  • Around the 20th of November, the backers of my crowdfunding will get an EARC of my forthcoming essay.
  • By the 31st of November I have to deliver another 18.000-words story to my American publisher (and this will actually make four stories, 66.000 words in total,  in four months for this specific project).
  • By December the 15th my self-published, Italian-language non-fiction book will hit the shelves.
  • By December the 31st I will have to get at least 70.000-words worth of fantasy novel and submit them to Angry Robot.
  • And there will most likely be a 5000-words spin-off of Aculeo & Amunet in a highly rated magazine somewhere in 2018.

I don’t think I’ll take part in NaNoWriMo this year, after all.

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70.000 words in 14 weeks

And then all of your plans go up in the air, of course.
Fact is, I just saw this…

… and I thought, why not?
The guidelines on Angry Robot’s website ask for a finished manuscript of 70.000 to 130.000 words, in the science fiction and/or fantasy genre.
It’s 15 weeks right now to the 31st of December.
Leave one week out to plan and outline, and this means writing 500/1000 good words per day, every day.
Stick to that, and I’d be set, and well within the requested word-count.
It’s not much, actually. Continue reading


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The end is nigh

I just passed the 10.000 words mark, and the halfway point in my planned outline.
The end of the story I am writing is finally in sight.
As it usually happens, now that all the pieces are on the chessboard and things should begin to finish, I need a moment to carefully plan the next moves.
What will happen, in what sequence, where.
I need to up the action.
All three major characters will have their big action scenes (one each, carefully mapped and choreographed, and one involving the whole team), the evil plot will be revealed, justice will triumph and the main bad guy will have his just desserts.
Which means roughly 8000 words…  Continue reading